Some people say that all young
people should have full-time education until they are 18 years old. To what
extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many countries implement education law,
which is under 19 year-old students must have essential educations. I
completely agree with this idea and I will write down some reasons why I
support this view.
First and foremost, students are
immature human being yet. We can learn about not only many of subjects but also
basic social skills such as making a good relationship with others and how to
work with others throughout the team projects in a school. These social
abilities may seem not important as much as subjects such as math and science
but it is essential and fundamental skills for living in a real life. If they
cannot gain these abilities from school, they might having a difficult
situation about communication with colleagues, moreover, they could do not make
a right and wise choice when they have to choose a reasonable decision-making
because of their lake of education.
Another reason is that there are
tons of dangerous things in our society, so if youngsters who quit the school
due to their burden of educational cost, they more likely to be exposed to
serious criminal such as prostitution of children or fraud. Children are immature
and having a lake of judgment, therefore there will be a lot of people who
approach it for it
In conclusion, if we do not ensure
the full-time education for the students who under 19 years old, there are a
huge negative impacts on youngsters who will lead our society in the future.
Thus, I firmly believe that government should guarantee the formal education.
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