The
diagram gives information concerning all steps in the water cycles, and it
divides this process into a total of five steps. Overall, it is apparent that
the water cycle is the a repeated process. This is because the water is
evaporated by the sun, and then it falls back to the ground in the form of
precipitation.
This
process begins when the sun causes water to evaporate water is evaporated into the atmosphere due to the sun. As
time passes, the water rises into the air, and water droplets are formed in
clouds. After this process of condensation has been completed, the clouds move
on land. Once there, the water falls back to the ground in the form of
precipitation such as snow and rain.
Now that
the waters have has fallen, it gathers on the ground in puddles and sewers. There
are two obvious characteristics that can happen to this runoff water. It could
be evaporated into the atmosphere by the sun. If this does not occur (If this is not the case~라고 쓰셔도 됩니다. 이쪽이 조금 더 나아보이긴 하네요.), the
runoff water travels to the ocean. Finally, as the sun evaporates the water
into the air, this process begins again in the same way.
총평: (7/7/7/7) 7.0
이번 글 잘 써주셨습니다. 바로 전 두 개의 글은 내용상 약간의 문제점들이 있어서 6.0으로 내려갔지만, 원래 후케이님의 실력은 6.5정도는 되기 때문에 실전에서도 내용상 문제들이 생기지 않는 한 6.0까지 떨어질 일은 웬만하면 없을 거에요. 수고하셨습니다 :)