The map shows the change before and after the construction of the island. (섬 자체를 건설하지는 않습니다.)
Overall, it is clear that many tourist facilities have been built in the island because of the construction. There were no accomodations, reception, restaurant, and pier previously, and one couldn't (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다.) swim in the beach before.
Taking a closer look at the maps, one can see that the most noticeable alteration to the island is a pier built south of the island and a reception and restaurant in the middle of the island. They are connected by a new vehicle track. The other substantial change is the appearance of many accomodations. Six have been built on the left side of the reception and seven on the right. Furthermore, each has been connected by a foot path built newly. Lastly, swimming became become possible on the west coast of the island. This beach has excellent accessibility with an accommodation area because it is connected by a foot path (붙여주셔아 합니다.).
(목표 점수 7.0 감사합니다^^)
총평: (6/7/7/6) 6.5
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수고하셨습니다 :)