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As people are living longer than ever before, there are is growing concerns for both individuals and society in terms of the to average life span. Although aging populations has become critical problems, there are some solutions on the horizon.
The obvious problems with increasing older people are the health concerns of the aged and the tax revenue shortfall. One of the problems is that aged people are easily likely to be exposed to by serious diseases and lose their health. And (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 않습니다.) most of countries do not have enough hospital facilities such as hospitals, doctors and the medical personnel. In addition, with the decrease of by decreasing economically active people, there would be severe problems in our pension and retirement systems. Also governments are more likely to take a big burden for the elderly.
Although solving these problems is not easy, there are feasible steps which we can take. One effective solution for the elderly is doing regular exercise and eating a well-balanced diet to stay healthy. This is because prevention preventing is always better than cure. Another solution could be re-assessing our pension and retirement age extension policy. For instance, In South Korea, most of people are forced to be retired on their 60 or earlier. If those people can work longer, then than that the government would be are able to reduce the burden by tax revenues and elderly’s potential of poverty.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various problems (무엇에 대한 문제인지를 다시 한번 상기시켜주세요!) for both individuals and society, and the steps mentioned above are needed to tackle this phenomenon.
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