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문제
The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Households owing and renting accommodation in England and Wales 1918 to 2011
답안
The graph illustrates the rate of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 until 2011.
Overall, it is evident that the figures of both renters and owners fluctuated during the period.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the percentage of owner increased consistently from around 20 percent in 1918 to 50 percent in 1971. However, there was a considerable decrease in figures of renters in the same period, reaching 50 percent in 1971. After all, in 1971, the two categories was equal at 50 percent.
On the one hand, from 1971 to 2011, the ratio of owner excel that of renter. Also, the figure of household in rented accommodation increased consistently except for in 2011, when there was a slight decrease. In contrast, the percentage of households in owner decreased steadily except for in 2011, when there was a moderate increase.