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Since human beings have been blessed as living in a flood of advanced technology, people have hunched over pushing the tiny buttons of a little gadget in their hands, becoming nomophobia, who is literally afraid of being away from a mobile phone. As there are concerning voices coming out for this reliance on computer technology, this essay will provide my opinion about whether this tendency will worsen in the future or not, and also discuss how it will affect on human beings once this technology keeps giving its hand on us.
In the first place, technology is already spread everywhere. In fact, we now, human beings, have reached the point that it can no longer detach ourselves from this computer science that has melted in our daily lives. The Internet has brought us humongous transitions generation by generation and made it even possible to globalize by connecting the entire world as one. On top of that, computer technology has become pivotal in all existing industries in the current society. No contemporaries would want to go back to the time when there was no Internet for finding information by visiting the library to read piled text-based materials. For sure, we might have been living in a barbaric era if there had no Internet connection.
Admittedly, it is understandable that people concern the frequency of their reliance on such techniques, which might replace human beings in the near future. To be honest, we are now on an irreparable level in light of the benefits of the computer. However, I wonder if we should be sincerely reluctant to use these high techniques in order to avoid some irresistible factors that cause human beings to be overly dependent on computers. There will be still jobs or works to be done by only human-labor even in the future such as agriculture, construction industry, so I think it is unnecessary to take account of a few adverse factors yet.
In conclusion, the transition has already happened by computer technology, and it is too late to be undone as human society will be thrown into chaos without this such useful technology. I think we should embrace the changes that have been occurring through technological developments, and the fact our reliance on this marvelous technology will be going up in the future.
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