Q ; Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work for a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?
There has been a social issue about people who do not want to work for a long time without quit. Although some people claim that there are a lot of drawbacks for some economical reasons, others point out that these people with temporary jobs are able to strengthen their health and relationship by taking time with their friends or family. In my opinion, I would firmly argue that there would be a huge amount of advantages for working on short term.
First of all, there are a few people who think that temporary jobs may not maintain their living and our economy, but, according to a study about this phenomenon, the temporary jobs are beneficial to us and our society by extending the number of jobs and opportunities, as well. In addition, from a variety of works, young people are able to experience various occupations and even choose the job which is suitable to them. (마지막 두 문장은 사실상 같은 말을 표현만 바꿔서 말하는 거라, 별로 좋지는 않습니다.)
Furthermore, temporary work gives us lots of opportunities opportunity for taking a break and can concentrate on ourselves. Not only do most people not have enough time to relax but and also this situation makes them get a ‘burnout syndrome’ which is a huge health problem in our society. Meanwhile, people that have temporary jobs do not work for a long time, so as not working for a long time, there is a time to do what people want and it provides them another free time to enjoy their hobby or workout that they could not do. According to these circumstances, there would be a development of creativity and health.
In short, some arguments of this social issue are discussed in our society for workers and communities. Personally (결론의 두 문장을 한국어로 바꿔보시면 왜 Hence는 안 되는지 파악하실 수 있을 겁니다.) Hence, for some reasons, I am of the opinion that temporary jobs are able to create various opportunities and develop our economy with extension of employment.
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