People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that ever-increasing illnesses are becoming serious problems in our society. Many people are not concerned about their health because they do not have efficient time to take care of themselves and they frequently eat fast foods and instant foods that lead them to obesity or diabetes. In my personal opinion, I certainly agree that people should have to take care of their health.
To begin with, many people neglect their health care because of a lack of time. They are pressed for time deadline that they work overtime, holiday and weekend too, when they take time off they tend to not move or go anywhere and even they do not get out of the bed because of exhausted thus leading them to obesity. It is the only way to prevent obesity, people should do exercise and they figure out what sort of exercise; yoga, pilates and jog, they really enjoy. If people do workout routinely they should enhance their immunsystem.
Furthermore, many people like eating fast foods and instant foods because those are convenient, people do not have to spend time cooking as well as save money too. However, fast foods or instant foods do not contain sufficient nutritions that only have fat, sugar and carbohydrate that may cause obesity and diabete. People have to consider their health care consuming unhealthy foods, If they cook by themselves that would be able to prevent diabete.
To sum up, many people easily expose illnesses from their poor lifestyle and unhealthy diets that they sleep late and eat non nutrition foods. People have to dedicate themselves doing exercise and consuming healthy foods that should prevent serious disease. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree to take care of more health because If we lose our health we should not do anything what we want to do and I believe that health is the most important thing in my life.
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