The chart gives information about the number of student enrolments per two-month period at three different English language schools in 2017. Overall, with the exception of Best Communication English Academy, the other two schools showed an upward trend in student enrolment.
The number of students in New Zealand Centre for Language(NZCL) was 314 in Jan-Feb and it increased to 406 over the next two months. The peak season for NZCL was Jul-Aug, which showed was the highest figure (683) in this chart. After that, it slightly dropped to 601 in Sep-Oct, and there was a decrease of about 100 students in Nov-Dec. The number of students in MSE was less small compared to other schools. It was only 135 in the first two-month period. However, since June, students in MSE was higher in number (학생 자체가 높지는 않습니다. 학생 수가 높거나 할 뿐이에요.) than BCEA, which were 253, 321, 472 respectively for Jul-Aug, Sep-Oct and the last period.
BCEA had the highest the number of students in the first period, which was 398 and it increased by approximately 100 students in next period (너무 많이 쓰이고 있습니다.). However, after that, it fell to 212 and it marginally rose over to 267. In final period in 2017, it dropped to 209.
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