The government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is a common belief that imposing a fee on drivers who use their cars during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes. I strongly disagree with the above idea, and in this essay, I will represent some opinion for my belief.
First of all, some people think that the government should be impose a tariff for people who drive a car during rush hour. However, it is significantly unfair because people are able to use their car only except rush time. Also, it cannot resolve to reduce air quality, by imposing a fee. Actually, paying a rate is too short term plan because most people should use their vehicles when they commute to work, it means that driving a car is almost necessary. To deal with this problem, the government should plan other ways to build and increase the more convenient and fast public transports.
What is more, there are severe factors to aggravate to the air nowadays. A number of manufacture factories are operated on 24 hours, which is a more significant problem to the air quality. The recent research showed the main factor of air pollution was the fume from the factories, at almost 60 percent between 2015 and 2019. As a result, it proves that the factories pay more cost than the drivers.
To sum up, despite of the fact that to pay the rate from drivers during rush hour is one of the ways to reduce the air pollution from exhaust fumes, I believe that method is just temporary way. Also, it is unfair to pay during rush hour, and many manufacture factories affect to aggravate to the air. For these reasons, I completely disagree with the view that to impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution.
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