Name a person from history you admire. Why do you admire that person? What do you think we can learn from them?
The person from history I admire is king Sejong of Joseon dynasty. This is mainly because he tried to improve the quality of life of every Joseon person individual regardless of class. To be specific, he wanted to make a country without discrimination. In accordance with this strong conviction, he created the Korean alphabet, Hangul Hangeul to write and read from their names to complaints, wants and also invented various things which can help their life through the development of science. In addition, he expanded the territory based on his proficient diplomacy. I think that people have to learn from his mind which tried to consider and understand others, as well as his and effort for people.
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