The diagrams illustrate the lay out of the Marlton Gallery renovation before and after renovation.
Overall, it is clear that the gallery was significantly increased in the size. Moreover, it changed from five rooms with the roof garden to
seven rooms and along with the addition of the third floor.
Looking at the diagrams more closely, one can see that the roof
garden was removed in order to give space for the third floor (지도 문제에서 eliminate 는 그냥 가용 범위에서 빼버리세요!0 eliminated, and include the third floors. On the third floor, there
is new education centre to the west left (동서남북 표시가 없는 이상 사용해서는 안 됩니다. 다른데에도 바꿔주세요~) of the lift. Also, the media room was moved to
the third 3 floor to the east side of the lift. Lift was extended to the third floor. On
the second floor, there is a room for special exhibition which was the media room before, and
the room size was increased. The coffee shop was remained in same location in the
gallery. There is new parking lot directly beneath the coffee shop. In
addition, the stairs were located by the gift shop. Lastly, size of the front desk
was decreased. This is because a new coat room was built next to the front desk.
(167 word) 6점 목표입니다
총평: (6/6/6/6) 6.0
7~8점 기준으로 보면 아쉬운 내용들이 많은 편이지만, 6점만 필요한데 굳이 7~8점쪽 내용을 챙길 필요는 없습니다. 그 시간에 스피킹 스크립트나 공부하는 게 훨씬 효율적이고요. 지금 글도 비록 이런저런 문제가 있지만, 전체적으로 봤을 때 갖출 건 적절히 갖추고 있으므로 6.0 선에서는 아무런 문제가 없습니다.
대신 이정도의 글을 17분, 18분 내에 쓸 수 있도록 실전 연습은 꼭 해주세요! July님께는 그게 제일 중요합니다.
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