Some people say it is wrong that children have a part - time job. However, others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is often said say that working a part - time job (아마 논제에서 오타가 났거나 한 것 같은데, part-time job이 맞습니다. 지금처럼 띄어써서는 안 되고요. 결론에서도 다 바꿔주시면 됩니다.) have a negative effects on children while some people insist that children can grow up trough work experience. I believe that getting a job can have great effects be great things to them.
When children have a job, they would find it difficult to adjust work. They may be tired because of working and that leads to negative effects on daily life such as do no attention having trouble giving attention to class when they study in schools, sleeping late at night and waking wake up late in the morning. In addition, they can experience terrible situation such as facing faced unpleasant people or unfair owners and they can get traumas to similar things.
But there are some benefits of getting a job. When children have opportunity to work, they can organize their time effeciently. That experience may help to social life when they become an adult and get faith from their colleagues or a boss because organizing time is significant in community life. Also, working at a workplace is different from staying at home or studying in schools. Activities in community such as workplace, home, schools can give lessons when they perform their missions or interact with others. It may have significant influences on children and they can broaden their horizons and have a great value.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against the impact of having a part - time job in children's development, but I am convinced that this debate actually highlights the prominent effects on children's life.
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