소요시간 20분 / 늘 그렇듯 목표점수 6.5입니다!
맨 마지막 문장에서 팔릴 준비..이거를 쓸까 말까 고민하다가 놔두긴 했는데
어색하게 써지느니 그냥 과정만 딱 쓰고 마무리하는 게 낫겠죠?
감사합니다~!
이정도는 상관없습니다 :)
The image illustrates the procedure of producing instant noodles.
Overall, the process has two stages and the first stage begins in a storage silos and it has a total of six steps. The second stage starts with cups for packaging, and there are two steps.
The first stage begins with flour delivered by car from the storage silos and after arriving at the factory, flour is mixed with oil and water in the mixer. After that, the mixed flour is flattened by the rollers as dough sheets. In the next step, the flattened dough sheets are transformed (변한다보다는 잘라진다 등의 표현으로 바꿔주시면 됩니다.) into striped shape and then put into the noodles discs. At the sixth step, the noodles are fried with oil and then go through the dry process.
The second stage starts with prepared cups for packaging, as the dried noodles are put together with vegetables and spices to each cup. After the cups are filled with noodles, vegetables and spices, pass to the next step, labels are sealed to every cup to be finished to be sold.
총평: (7/7/7/7) 7.0
중간중간에 자잘한 사항들이 보이긴 하지만, 그래도 전반적으로는 잘 적어주셨습니다. 6.5는 무조건 받으시니까 편하게 공부하세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)