문제
You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Describe why you are having the party
-Give directions on how to get to the venue
-Suggest how you can accommodate him/her
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any adresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ㅇㅇ,
답변
Dear, Judy
Hi, Judy. It is been a while writing a letter to you! How's going everything? You know what? Finally, my sister Sunmi came vancouver again. Before we had a great time with together, right? So I'll do the party for welcomming her. If you are available please come vancouver, We can have a great time!
Date is September.19.Sat. Venue is my home. You can get off the skytrain at vancouver city station. And keep walking along the W.georgia st. If you arrive infront of the BC place, Please call me. I'll go out!
You don't need to prepare anything, but you can stay few days if you want. I'll set my guestroom only for you!
Please, give me RSVP. I cannot wait for that day! Let's stay safe before our party day. I really miss you and Sunmi said like that as well.
From. Your Sunny.
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