Some people think that studying
history is a waste of time while others think that it is essential to learn.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
While some people say that learning
about history is not worthy, other people argue that history is one of the most important subjects that we have to learn. I will be discussed discuss both views in this
essay, as well as the reason why and I believe that the latter view is more persuasive persuade.
On the one hand, there are some
arguments that we do not have to learn about history. One of the reasons why is
that when we study about history, we only focus on the names, years, essential
event of the history in order to receive grades for task the exam rather than truly understanding the
meaning of the history, and eventually we immediately forget the all of the
important history events as soon as we finish the exam. This phenomenon is totally a waste of wasting of time and even we could remember the history events, that is useless
in the real world.
However, there are also some
arguments that we should study history. First and foremost, history helps young
people understand their own culture and how their culture and country have
developed. Furthermore, history gives identify and helps unify people, and it gives
people a sense of roots and belonging. In addition, history teaches us about
tragedy happens tragedies which occurred in the past, such as 911 terror. It is essential
for both people in the past, present and future to never forget such events in
order to honor the memory of those people and to ensure that it never happens again.
In conclusion, although there are
some arguments that learning history is worthless, I believe that history is an important
subject as much as other subjects. Thus, people should do not underestimate the
value of the history.
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