Some people think that in order to produce a happy society, it is necessary to ensure that there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and poorest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
After the industrial revolution, every living people on this planet have to follow the rule of capitalizm no matter of their willingness. To maintain certain level of daily life and minimum fulfillment of living, the most essential factor have to be one thing; money. A number of people including psychologist and economist insist that providing manageable amount of money to each and every citizen by pursuing financial equality between the richest and poorest is the key for a happy society, which is unquestionably make sense to me.
First reason: reducing the huge hap of incomes of the richest and poorest would become a essential factor building psychological stability of the public. According to the study which had been initiated in Kent university by a collaboration of neurosciences and psychologists, it is discovered that the brain map of participants who feel they live in a economically well divided society show more evidences of joy and relax from their functional-MRI scan. If the difference between the incomes of the richest and poorest is little, then people in that group will feel less inferior about themselves which happens to be a powerful fundamental of society full of happiness.
Second reason the reduction of difference of financial sources between the richest and poorest will naturally make the poor could have more financial ability then before by redistribution of wealth. Hence, they would feel less pressure to make a money to get through their day and will be a cheerful member of the joyful society. For instance, when COVID-19 caused pandemic situation, the government provide various financial advises in South Korea. Some people worried because they thought it was a waste of taxes, however, it turned out that giving spare money to the poorest 30 percent has been spark of successful public mind care because they do not have to worried about managing their basic life factors such as food for living.
To conclude, I think that it is necessarily important to make sure that the difference of financial status of the richest and poorest and it is only method to contributes building a happy society.
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