The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph indicates about the four public places that visited by Canadian. Cinema is the most beloved place that 185 percent of Canadian visited and theatre is the least popular place which is only 55 percent of Canadian visited, in total.
There are three sectors in the cart above which is categorized by the birth characteristic of the people who answered. New migrants born in other countries prefer library by around 55 percent, and the second and the third famous place for them is cinema and zoo. New migrants born in English-speaking countries shows different features. The most visited place is cinema, which is followed by zoo, library, and theatre. Likewise, the people who born in Canada visited four places just as same order as the new migrants born in English-speaking countries. Finally, the least visited place that all three group replied is same; theatre. The percentage that this charts includes is total 500 percent, which is combined each proportion of every sector.
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