Q.
Online news is not a reliable source of the
truth; we should only trust recognised journalists.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A.
It is true that there are a lot of fake online
fake news in the world. With regards to this, some people say it is not right
to judge something with just articles that written by unknown journalists. This
essay will discuss on this topic. (이렇게 쓰지 마시고, 내 입장을 명확히 밝혀주셔야 합니다. 동의하면 동의한다, 반대하면 반대한다로요.)
As technology advances, the speed of the
information is getting faster and anyone can give and take information easily. In
this flood of information, some medias convey the fake news for their own
benefit. In order to distinguish prevent the truth from the fake news, we might think that
we should trust only recognized journalists. However, if we block minor medias
and articles, media will not be various and the opportunity for other small
media will be disappear. Therefore, I strongly believe we should have a
perception of embracing embrace the online news.
However, I do not think the government should
make a law that imposes a penalty for the fake news. Countless damage caused by
fake news is occurring. To prevent this, the government should involve in. (뭐에 involve하는 건지를 적어주셔야 됩니다.) it
is because, the greater fake news become, the greater the damage of media environment.
If the fake news becomes more in number became more, a majority of people will only trust a recognized
journalist. This can lead to monopoly system. Not only this, it is hard to
decide which one is recognized or credible articles.
To conclude, there is no doubt that there
are a lot of fake online news. However, in order to prevent monopoly of specific
media company, people should embrace online news and the government should
involve in this issue. (이거 역시 마찬가지입니다. 어떻게, 혹은 뭐에 involve인지를 밝혀주세요!)
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서론에서 입장을 밝혀야 하는 이유는, 그렇게 해야 독자들, 그리고 채점관들에게 글의 방향을 예고해주고, 그들이 보다 수월하게 읽어나가게 도울 수 있기 때문입니다. 그렇지 않을 경우 채점관들이 스스로 글을 읽어나가면서 입장을 추론해야하는데, 이 경우 그들이 읽어나가면서 머릿속에 글에 대한 구조를 그리기 어려워집니다. 고로 꼭 넣어주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)