The two diagrams illustrate the layouts of two offices. The first room is for up to eight people and the second room can take a maximum of is for up to ten people.
Overall, it is clear that the desks are separated in room A and pushed together in room B. Moreover, the layouts of tow office have are several differences in terms of office furniture and equipments.
Looking at the diagrams more closely, one can see that there are resepectively four desks on both side in room A. The table is between them in the same room. Unlike room A, the desk has ten that face each other ten desks that face each other on the left side of the room and the table is on the right side. In room A, the bookshelves are located in right side of the entrance while the bookshelves are on the left side of the entrance. The coffee machine in room A is against the wall across from the bookshelves. in room B, it is next to the entrance.
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