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The pie charts give information concerning the electricity units produced by fuel sources in Australia and France between 19809 and 2000.
According to the Australia charts, the total amount of production was 100 units in 1980. Among the resources, coal was certainly used the most to create electricity power, taking up a half of the chart. This figure was followed by hydro power, natural gas and oil. Moreover, in 2000, the coal usage still accounted for the largest portion, increasing to 75 % of the total units (170 units).
When it comes to fuel resources used for power in France, the types of units were more various than that in Australia. There are coal, oil, natural,gas and nuclear power. Their quantities were comparable, with about 20 units.<(unclear) It is interesting to note that firstly the total production doubled from 90 units to 180 units. Secondly, in 2000. nuclear power became the principal resource (126 units), and this was used in France Australia over the period. Next, each 25 units of oil and coal were made for electricity. The portion of natural gas and hydro power was slight with 2 units.
Overall, it is seen that Austraila and France showed completely different trends in resource use for producing electricity power.
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