Some say that children are given too much free time. They argue that this time should be used to do more schoolwork. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people insist that children do not have a lot of free time and they should spend time on studying in schools. Studying in schools is a good way to spend children's time but there are the best things rather than work.
Children are active in many sides therefore they should do many activities to release their energy. Their curiosities are increasing while they grow up and spending free time will help to solve them. These activities can improve their own skills such as communication, creativityand reasoning. Also, children can choose what they what to perform in their time. This may enhance their independence and identity and learn how to organize their time efficiently. Of course, there are good things in work and children can learn many things through studying in schools. Nevertheless, children have many free time because they are not scholars. Studying in classroom can read alpabets but that can not ensure to understand its meaning. While children can learn a lot of experiences in their time and that play a significant role in their values. In addition, acquired skills in childhood will help them to live in communities when they become adults. Children should be given knowledge and skills for adult lifes. Having free time is not a waste and it should be cherished.
For the reasons mentioned aboved, I totally agreed that children should spend more time in freedom rather than schoolwork because of release their curiocities, enhancing their skills and the experiences that can affect life.
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