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Field Trip Transportation
Your children’s grade 5 teacher likes to take children on field trips to museums or parks. Sometimes the teacher takes the children on public buses. Some parents are unhappy. They say the school should always use school buses even though it’s more expensive. You have been asked to respond to an opinion survey.
Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Write about 150-200 words.
Option A: Public Transit: I think it’s okay for children to travel on public transit.
Option B: School Buses: I would prefer children only travel on school buses.
Total 192 words
Traveling on a public bus is a good way to save transportation expenses on school field trips. However, in my opinion, using school buses for field trips will be better for our children in terms of safety and respect of other passengers.
On public buses, our children could encounter many people. They are usually nice and friendly. However, some passengers could be hostile to children with no reason. There are some news articles that some people assaulted young kids on public buses. It is burdensome for our teachers to keep their eyes not only on students, but also on other people in the bus.
Also, our public buses are not that big. When our children get on the bus all together, the bus would be very crowded. In addition, because children would be quite excited to go on a field trip, they might be very loud in the bus. Other passengers would be annoyed in the situation.
With those reasons above, I believe that it is more important to protect our children from unexpected issues in public and respect other people using the public transit by using school buses than to save money.