In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.
In today’s world, across nations, most
individuals prefer living in a house temporarily to purchasing their own place.
In a general sense, there is an abundance of merits and demerits related to
this phenomenon.
A big group of the population have many
reasons to believe that renting a house has numerous benefits. First and the
foremost, renting is easier to get a chance to live in a house for people who do not have
a big money for purchasing it as they can only pay a small amount of rental fee
regularly. In particular, the innumerable young minds like students and beginners
in society can not help becoming a tenant for their schools or companies since buying
a house is too expensive for them in Korea. Not just that but also, they do not
need to worry about house maintenance because the landlord takes care of it. Last
but not the least, there is no need to pay property tax as they do not own it. (여기도 네 개를 짧게 쓰는 것보다는 2개 정도만 상세하게 써주시면 더 좋긴 한데, 일단은 추후에 바꾸신다고 하셨으므로 저도 따로 건드리지는 않겠습니다.)
On the other hand, there are also
individuals having the opinion that being a renter has adverse effects because they
can not have a property. As a matter of fact, it is hard to live in a renting
house permanently if they do not extend their contract in which the rental fee would
go higher every year. In conjunction, since real estate is one of the best investment
in Korea, renters can not get the value of the money even though the price of
the house is increased. In the long run, they can not save their money if they
have to regularly spend money for a rental fee regularly. To illustrate, one of the main goal for
Koreans is having their own home considering that living a house temporarily makes
people unstable and have concerns to move out.
In conclusion, there are a couple of pros and cons which are responsible for individuals deciding to lease a house instead of purchasing their own place.
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