1. 라이팅에서의 목표 점수
6.5
2. 다음 시험 날짜, 그리고 위의 점수를 아무리 늦어도 언제까지는 만들어야 하는지
시험본적 없음, 늦어도 21년 2~3월
3. 현재 글을 쓰는데에 몇 분이 걸렸는지+단어 수+외부 도움(모범답안 필사) 등이 있었는지의 여부
26분, 196단어
4. 그 외 제가 알아두면 도움될만한 기타 정보나 현재 학생 여러분들의 공부 상황 등
독학중입니다. 라이팅 1,2 한달정도 목표로 템플릿 및 빈출어휘에 집중하려고 합니다.
Source : UNWTO
The bar chart illustrates the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014 and the data was collected by UNWTO.
Overall, Chinese consumers expended the most money on travel but other Asian countries ranked lower than America and European countries.
According to the data of UNWTO, interestingly, consumers of China spent overwhelmingly a lot of money among other countries' consumers. They used about $110 billion, making it the only country which spent more than $110 billion. This figure was followed by that of America and Germany that expended slightly over $80 billion each. Even though German travellers spent less than $20 billion than that of China, their consumption was seen as the number one figure in Europe.
On the other hand, the Uk's consumers spent nearly $60 billion, making it the second expenditure in Europe, which was approximately twofold than that of Singapore which recorded the top spending in Asia. South Korea and Hongkong's consumers used $20 billion each. However, the rest of the three countries, India, Malaysia and Taiwan people expended less than $20 billion on travel. Especially, Taiwanese spent the least money that only as half as that of South Korea.
*연속으로 갑자기 6.0으로 확 떨어져서 자신감이 많이 줄었네요..
수학을 하지 말라고 하셨는데 수치비교를 안하면 쓸 내용이 상당히 많이 줄어서 어쩔수없이 약간의 수치비교는 넣었습니다..다시 한번 정리 해 주시면 감사하겟습니다 ㅠ...
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