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Since human beings have been blessed as living in a flood of advanced technology, people have hunched over pushing the tiny buttons of a little gadget in their hands, becoming nomophobia, a person who is literally afraid of being away from a mobile phone. As there are concerned voices coming out for this reliance on computer technology, this essay will provide my opinion about whether this tendency will worsen or not (저 뒤에 가도 크게 상관 없긴 합니다.) in the future or not, and also discuss how it will affect on human beings once this technology keeps giving its hand on us.
In the first place, the Internet has brought us humongous (대체로 라이팅에서 쓸만한 단어는 아닙니다.) transitions generation by generation, and the more impressive thing is that this improvement has not stopped. Soon I think people will get more benefits from this technology to alleviate the inconvenience humanity is experiencing in many areas. To be more specific, there will be no more text-based teaching material in all forms of educational institutions. Rather than carrying the multitude of books, students will require digital devices to download files for their study. On top of that, this technology is about to facilitate diagnosing the symptoms of patients to GP through the online communication platforms, which will be welcoming welcome news to people who live in distant and secluded areas where that are disadvantaged from medical services.
Admittedly, it is understandable that people concern the frequency of their reliance on such techniques, which might replace human beings in the near future. To be honest, we are now on an irreparable level in light of the benefits of the computer. However, I wonder if we should be sincerely reluctant to use these high techniques in order to avoid some irresistible factors that cause human beings to be overly dependent on computers. There will still be jobs or works to be done by only human-labor even in the future such as agriculture, construction industry, so I think it is unnecessary to take account of a few adverse factors yet.
In conclusion, the transition has already happened by computer technology, and it is too late to be undone as human society will be thrown into chaos without this such useful technology. I think we should embrace the changes that have been occurring through technological developments, and the fact our reliance on this marvelous technology will be going up in the future.
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