Some people think that
urbanization is a positive development, some do not. Discuss both views and
give your opinion.
Since
the past, more and more people have moved to urban from rural area, some
people agree with the urbanization because there are many advantages in the
city and whole of the country. Meanwhile, there are those who believe that it
does not develop positively and later make some serious issues. Although both
opinions will be discussed, personally I think that the latter is more
persuasive.
To
begin with, there is an argument about the necessity of urbanization which become
a larger city and more populated one. The main pros of it is that people who
live in the central areas can enjoy the better quality of life. Because the
most of new policies and systems tend to be carried out in there at first so
they can use the improved technology, infrastructures, education and medical
departments conveniently. In accordance with this situation, there are more
chances to offer employment in diverse kinds of fields. It is also possible to increase
number of job seekers who originally were habitant in countryside. It finally
brings the positive circulation of economy which helps every person, the city
and furthermore the country.
On
the other hand, the oppositions assert the negative consequences of urbanization.
One of the big disadvantages is the environmental pollution. For convenience
and profit, people cause the emission of harmful gases and smoke from factories,
vehicles and the destruction of wildlife natural habitats in the forests. These
pollutions are the main culprit of the increase of temperature in the earth. Another
problem is expansion of urban is the regression of rural areas. It means that as
young people have continued to migrate to the city, there won’t be enough
people to work in the agricultural industry can affect the quality and quantity
of production.
In
conclusion, even though urbanization allows people to live higher quality of
life with hiring, it makes bad situations in the nature and the agricultural areas.
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