Some people think that
urbanization is a positive development, some do not. Discuss both views and
give your opinion.
Since
the past, more and more people have moved to the urban from rural area, and some
people agree with the urbanization because there are many advantages in the
city and the whole of the country. Meanwhile, there are those who believe that it
does not develop positively and later makes some serious issues. Although both
opinions will be discussed, personally I think that the latter is more
persuasive.
To
begin with, there is an argument about the necessity of urbanization which become
a larger city and more populated one. The main pro pros of it is that people who
live in the central areas can enjoy the better quality of life. Because the
most of most new policies and systems tend to be carried out in there at first, so
they can use the improved technology, infrastructures, education and medical
departments conveniently. In accordance with this situation, there are more
chances to offer employment in diverse kinds of fields. It is also possible to increase
number of job seekers who originally were habitant in the countryside. It finally
brings the positive circulation of economy which helps every person, the city
and furthermore the country.
On
the other hand, the oppositions assert the negative consequences of urbanization.
One of the big disadvantages is the environmental pollution. For convenience
and profit, people cause the emission of harmful gases and smoke from factories,
vehicles and the destruction of wildlife natural habitats in the forests. These
pollutions are the main culprit of the increase of temperature in on the earth (여기는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.). Another
problem is expansion of urban is the regression of rural areas. It means that as
young people have continued to migrate to the city, there won’t (줄임말은 풀어써주세요!) be enough
people to work in the agricultural industry can affect the quality and quantity
of production.
In
conclusion, even though urbanization allows people to live higher quality of
life with hiring, it makes bad situations in the nature and the agricultural areas.
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Earth 관련해서는 밑을 참고해주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)
오늘은 'Earth' 의 대소문자 관해서 다뤄볼 겁니다.
Earth 는 고유명사가 될 수도, 보통명사가 될 수도 있습니다. 이때, 경우에 따라 전자는 대문자 시작, 후자는 소문자 시작해주셔야하고요.
Earth 가 태양계의 세 번째 행성인 '지구' 를 의미할 때에는 대문자 시작해주시면 됩니다. 가령, Looking at our planet Earth from outer space was an unforgettable experience. 라는 문장에서는 지구라는 의미로 작성되었으므로 대문자로 시작하는 것이죠.
반면 대지, 땅에 대해서 얘기할 때에는 소문자 시작입니다. 예를 들어, By digging the earth for about an hour, we were finally able to find the treasure. 라는 문장에서는 땅이라는 의미로 쓰였기 때문에 소문자 시작인 것이죠.
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