Gender equality has not been achieved in
our society. Women still do not have the same rights and opportunities as men.
To what extend do you agree or disagree.
It is often argued that there is still discrimination
of gender in our society. With regards to this, many people say women do not
have equal treatment as men. In this essay, I will discuss about this social
issue.
The discrimination of gender is definitely
gets better than few decades ago. However, it is true that many people still
participate in social movements that against gender discrimination. It implies
that there are still problems about it that we have to solve. I believe most of
gender discriminations come from old generation. Especially in old generation,
some people think that the jobs can be sorted by gender. It is because they are
used to these stereotypes, and it would be hard to break their notion. Nevertheless,
the situation is getting better by social movements and educations.
However, social movements and educations
can lead to reverse gender discrimination. Most of people are not but some people
want special treatments than men have. For example, some social activists’
pressure created a women’s parking lot. If they want to have same rights and opportunities,
availability for a parking space also has to be equal. Therefore, some people’s
logic is contradictory. They are just using their logic for their own benefits.
To conclude, it is obvious that there are
still some gender discriminations and I agree to a certain extent that gender
equality has not been totally established yet. However, we should not overlook
the reverse gender discrimination. It can lead to an another social problem.
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Q. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 유형: 1문단 = 논제의 하나의 관점, 2문단 = 논제의 다른 관점
To what extend do you agree or disagree 유형: 좀 더 주관적으로..?
물론 문제에 주제아 따라 다르겠지만 보통 both point of views 유형은 좀더 객관적인데 비해 오늘 쓴 유형은 좀더 주관적으로 쓰면 되는 건가요??