The given maps illustrate changes took place
in the town of Somerville during the 10-year period.
Overall, it is clear that a main road that
used to cross the town have been rerouted, and commercial establishments, such as a golf course, hotels, restaurants have been built along a newly constructed footpath.
(오버뷰에 전 지도는 좀 vacant 했는데 이후에 건물이 많이 들어서서 hub가 됐다는 식을 말을 써야하나요?
그냥 크기 커진것, 추가 된것, 사라진 것들 확인해서 써놓으면 오버뷰가 아닌가요? )
About ten years ago, there was the main
road beside the river, and there were two car parks. While the car park 1 was
located in between the river and the main road, the car park 2 was located across
the main road.
Nowadays, the path of the main road has changed, heading to the car park 2, and the golf course had been constructed next to the car park. Besides, facilities, including two hotels, restaurants, a café, a bookstore, and shops has been created along the footpath, which was not constructed back then. In addition, the restaurants and café have been built in the former car park 1. When it comes to the two shops, they are facing each other along the footpath.
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