Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is considered that people nowadays have too many selections attributable to a variety of factors. I steadfastly agree with this statement taking our current social phenomenon and an advanced technology into consideration.
To begin with, as time goes by, an increased population brings about a number of choices that people could make. It is axiomatic that the increased number of people today results in diverse perspectives, thoughts, and beliefs. These varied ways of thinking create an array of new occupations that did not exist in the past, such as designers specialised in dog’s fur, and organisations that deal with current social issues that did not happen in the past. These newly developed concepts would make people have too many choices, which allows them to feel confused about what to choose.
On top of that, on account of the developed technology, especially the internet, people are offered many different choices. It is an undeniable fact that the internet helps people to know a storehouse of information and knowledge ranged from rudimentary facts to expertise. However, as this technology bestows various perspectives at once on a single subject, it could make people wonder whether viewpoint is the one they are looking for and adrift in the midst of the flowing data. For example, in an effort to search for certain information, people need to compare a number of websites, YouTube channels, or experts online in modern days.
In conclusion, when all specific reasons and relevant examples are considered and evaluated, I firmly believe that those living in the 21st century have difficulties about what to choose.
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