There are many people who says the personal
information about violent criminals should not be available to public in order
to protect the personal life of criminals. However, I have to disagree about
that opinion. I think the information should be publicly available.
People who think the personal information
should be protected argues that the information could be sensitive to that
person and it is against the human rights. To be specific, if the information about
the person get released to public, the friends and family who are innocent can
be affected by this situation unguarded. Therefore, even if they don’t commit
crimes, their lives can be ruined and be pointed at by public. It is unfair to
them, so people say that the personal information should be protected.
On the other hand, violent criminals can be
danger to the society and should protect victims by releasing the information about
the criminals to the public. For example, there was a violent crime 10 years
ago. Since the crime was so violent, the criminal went to prison. But in few
years, the criminal got out so the victim had to live in fear. By making the personal
information of criminal available to the public, it can prevent crimes to
happen again by monitoring the criminal closely.
Also, it can protect the society. To be specific, by avoiding the criminal, it
can prevent the possible crime from happening.
In conclusion, the personal information of
violent criminals should be available to the public. The basic information such
as addresses, names, and faces should be opened to the public because it can
prevent possible crimes to happen and protect the society.
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