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It is often said that these days some people are likely to change their electronic devices too frequently. There are some reasons
why this is happening, and that the changes can be seen as a progress. To begin with, there are a couple of
reasons why people are eager to purchase new electronic devices without
necessity. Firstly, people tend to change their electronic devices due to
social trends. In other words, anyone who is interested in electronic devices may
want to keep up with the latest trend. If everybody having brand new devices is
around a person who does not have the newest devices, he or she will feel
envious of them. As a result, it makes people purchase and keep up with the
newest electronic devices. Moreover, as companies that produce electronic
devices launch their products on markets better designed, and a higher
specification arouse people’s desire to buy their new products. (여기는 문장이 살짝 꼬인 것 같은데, 의도하신 바에 대해 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) With the
development of designs and technologies, electronic device companies can more
easily make people open their pockets to change new devices. Along with the reasons stated above, changing
electronic devices seems like a positive development for various reasons. First
of all, among the increase of demands towards change electronic devices, companies
which produce electronic devices are establishing more factories. In other words,
it can help improve the employment rate in the areas where factories are
constructed. In addition, the companies have to launch their new products in a with more
developed version, and features to satisfy people’s demands. As a result, it likely
to cause a substantial increase in electronic technologies.
In conclusion, people these days try hard to buy new devices for keeping up with the latest trend and improving technologies
are now more attracting people eager to purchase them. Hence, this trend is
most likely to continue due to increased demands towards electronic devices. (논제에서 예측을 하라고 요구한 적은 없습니다.)
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