There are two pertinent ways to deal with a
miserable circumstance; one is to embrace a bad situation and the other is to
develop it a situation. Nowadays, it is a contentious issue as two groups have
contended with two different ideas.
First of all, enduring a devastating
situation has a voluminous merit in that it is advantageous to adapt to the
situation. When people who have has hordes of experiences of adapting to the bad
circumstance encounter the terrible circumstance, there should be a high
probability of handling the situation shrewdly. Furthermore, it is considered
appropriate that getting out of the bad situation without thinking seriously is
good for mental health. Being distressed all the time because of the bad
situation could be harmful to sustaining a healthy mindset.
On the other hand, it has been said that overcoming a given situation and making it positive could be more proper for the purpose of changing the predicament to the opportunity to develop. For example, there were a number of scientists such as Newton who made a mistake and had a lot of pitfalls initially, but obtained reputation by succeeding the experiment at the end. This empirical instance demonstrates that altering the viewpoint by strengthening the positive aspect of the situation has an optimistic role of struggling the situation.
In conclusion, dealing with the same
situation differently has respective benefits. In addition, It it is useful to
take advantage of two methods flexibly on a case by case basis without
excluding the counterpart other thoughts.
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