Levels of youth crime are increasing
rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and
suggest some solutions.
Nowadays, the percentage of juveniles’
crime has been dramatically inclined than in the past, so a myriad of
individuals are concerned about this phenomenon and make an effort to solve the
problem. Therefore, I will consider the reason for the social issue and suggest
a solution.
To begin with, it is well known that if
youth commit a crime, they are punished lighter lower than adults who are convicted with the same crime.
Nowadays, a lot of adolescents acknowledge this fact that although they steal
stuff or bully individuals, punishments to them are quite low in the current
law system. For example, in South Korea, recently juveniles’ crime has
gradually increased, so some professionals posit that the punishment for youth
is significantly light. (여기는 앞에서 했던 말을 대한민국이라는 고유명사만 붙여서 그대로 반복하는 것에 지나지 않습니다.) Therefore, a myriad of juveniles know the law for them
and they commit crimes without hesitation.
To handle the phenomenon, the authorities
should strengthen the punishment for juveniles’ crime since strong laws are
able to plant fear of punishment in youth. It is obvious that strict
regulations could reduce the rate of crimes. For instance, Singapore is pretty
a famous country for its strict laws, so people who live there tend not to
commit a crime because they have a fear of punishment. (여기 역시 마찬가지입니다.) Likewise, to alleviate
the rate of juveniles’ crime, representatives should pass a law that makes the
punishment for youth strengthen.
In conclusion, the main reason why these
days, youth crimes are increasing these days is that the punishment for them is quite
light. Hence, the authorities should make laws related to juveniles’ crime
stronger to prevent the for preventing youth from committing crimes.
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