Your Answer ▼ In modern society, many married women are working with their job so lots of kinder garden and daycare center are needed, too. Some people argue that like woman's social activity can improve children's independence, however I do not agree with this idea. In this essay, I will outline the negative impact on children of working women with my opinions.
Firstly, because of early-return to their office from maternity leave, many young babies have to go to the daycare center in the period requiring mother's affection. Of course there are many perfect teachers to care them, but it is not enough for babies compared to their mother's one. Following a recent study from a big university in Korea, a 5-year-old EQ whose childrens growing up with their mother is higher than those who do not. Moreover this situation can lead more severe situation such as youth crime or joining a gang because of lack of relationship.
Secondly, married mother do not have enough time relatively to prepare playing with their kids. It is needed for parents to study how to play with their baby. However working moms are always busy so even having a breakfast is burden for them. With this situaion, children can lose a chance to lean that how to build up the relationship with their parents who have to be a closed person in children's life. It is note that these children suffer from make the conversation with their peers as well as mom and father. So it can lead children's society adjustment, low-level of academic, and so on. In overall, working mom should work in their filed and become a specialist in their field, however upbringing their kids is most valuable one in human's life. Also goverment and companies have to support this working moms with enact related policies and so on. Society should know that the children and working moms are our brilliant future.
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