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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET
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The provided table chart elaborates the consumption and production of A cursory glance reveals that the European people consumed remarkably large amount of potatoes compared to the other given countries. Moreover, Europe nations produced the second largest amount of potatoes with Asia. According to the details with regard to the consumption of potatoes, African people ate 14kg of potatoes per person, which was the lowest figure in the given table Turning to the gross domestic production data, the largest amount of potatoes, exactly 131.2 million tones ,were produced by Asian countries, followed by Europe in which grew 126.3 million tones of potatoes. The production of potatoes in North America had 24.7 million tones. There was nearly identical quantity of potatoes produced in South and Central America and Africa, slightly more than 15 and 16 million tones each. 총평: (6/7/6/6) 6.5 이번 글은 조~~금 아쉽긴 했습니다. 제가 널널하게 매기긴 했으나, 아마 6.0까지는 떨어질 수 있을 거에요. 이번 글 중에서 The area with the second highest ~~~ 문장의 경우 제가 고쳐드린 걸 잘 캐치해서 다른 태스크1에도 응용해보세요! 수고하셨습니다 :) | ||||||||||||||||
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