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In modern society, there is a hotly debated issue about quality of prisoners' life including education and trainings with rising consciousness of the way their government use tax. Some people argue that education and training for prisoners should be stopped since they are not the role of prisons. However, I disagree with the opinion. This essay will present why education for criminals is required after looking into the given opinion.
On the one hand, the main role of prison is isolationg offenders from society where citizens live to punish them and protect citizens. Thus, education and training provided to prisoners should be stopped. Additionally, tax should be used for citizens, not for criminals. There are a myriad of problems to solve for citizens which require high cost such as housing problem of growing population cities and education for children from low-income families. For these reasons above, it is preferable to say that education is abusing citizens' tax. (여기에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
Nevertheless, education and training courses are necessary in prisons because there are a lot of benefits. The other role Another role of a prison is resocializing to resocialize criminals. They should educate prisoners how to behave as a member of society to help prisoners do not commit a crime anymore. Training courses for job are also a significant way of resocialization. In fact, a lot of criminals commit crimes again because they can not get a job. By training to help prisoners get a job after going out, they can be adopted to society easier and contribute to society. Thus, resocialization Resocialization of criminals by education and trying courses for job contribute to safety of society.
In conclusion, while there are some issues of tax management (강조하고자 하는 사항은 문장의 뒤로 넣어야 합니다.) it is evident that education and training courses provided to prisoners are required, while there are some issue of tax management. A secure Secure society can be is served for citizens by education provided to prisoners. |