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It is common belief that having a lot of
money is the main way to be happy in life. Some people say that earning a lot
of money give them lots of chances that they can do many things like leisure activities
and trips. However, it is true that there are other things that that can make
people happy in their life.
To begin with, people can get more options
in their life if they have a lot of money. They can purchase lots of good
products that are is too expensive thanks to money. People can have various choices
when they buy goods like clothes cloths, electric product, and foods. In addition, they
can go other countries without worrying. Going abroad requires is required a lot of
money. People have to buy an airplane ticket, book hotel, and eat foods when they
are in other countries. Studies in Korea have shown that 40 percentage of Korean
have not never been other countries before because they do not have enough
money to go trip. They are hard to save money because of other consumes like house
rental fee, insurances, and car lease fee. (초록색은 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.) Therefore, it is true that earning a
lot of money make more various options in people’s life.
Nevertheless, someone say that people can be
happy from other things not money. First of all, someone feels happiness through
people like friends, and families. They enjoy my things like playing games, communicating,
and drinking with their friends. People do not need a lot of money to do these
things. In addition, other people say that having lot of free time is the best
way to be happy in their life. Studies in Korea have shown that workers who earn
less 5,000 dollars and work 40 hours per week feel more happiness rather than
others who get over 10,000 dollars per month and work over 50 hours per weeks. Therefore,
it is clear that other things can make people happy instead of money.
To sum up, it is true that money make
people can select various options in their life. However, There there are lots of
things that can make people happier rather than money like friends, family, and time.
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