■ Direction· Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
· Task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM
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Candidate Name:텍스트 Candidate Number:텍스트
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The given bar graph gives the information about the number of men’s and women’s fitness membership from 1970 to 2000.
Overall, both sex’s membership showed a lot of fluctuations over the period.
Also, the figure of men saw a downward trend, while an upward trend can be seen in women's membership.
Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that the number of men who enrolled the fitness membership started at around 2000 in 1970, but it experienced a considerable increase of 3000 five years later. After showing a decline to roughly 2500 in 1980, the number of men was less than women until 1990. Subsequentially, it reached at 5000, making it the highest figure in the data, but the figure also showed the lowest number at 1000 after plummeting at the final year.
Moving on to the other gender, the initial figure was about 1000, a half of that of men’s initial figure, this gap trend also can be seen in 1975. Notably, women’s ‘membership outraced men from 1985 to 1990, it then presented an ascent to around 2800 a half of a decade later. It ended at 2000 at the end of the period, which was twice as much as its intial initial figure.
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Total Score: /9 Examiner:
TR
(Task Response) CC
(Coherence and Cohesion) LR
(Lexical Resource) GRA
(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
Score /9 /9 /9 /9
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