Title : In some countries marriages are arranged by the parents but in other countries, people choose their own marriage partner.
There is on doubt that marriage is one of the main thing in life. As hushands succeed, there will be an exceelent partner needed. In some countries, parents choose their daaaaughters' or sons' partners. on the other hand, in other countries there is no pressure to choose individual partners by their parents.
To have a partner chosen by parents has many advantages. The partners could have a job which is an exxcellent such as a doctor, or CEO. It is not uncommon for people who have the partner chosen, by their parents to live abundantly especially with money. For shlitary people, they do not have to waste time to have relationships with a person who is going to be a partner.
Marriage is managed by the people who are going to marry in other countries. It takes all people in happiness because a marriage of delight comes from couples' love. What schould influence children better than the mood of the family? The hoals of marriage as mainly three hoals. Firstly, the ambience of the family should be blessed. Secondly, for children, the parents try to rear cleverly and healthward. Lastly, They have to have filial piety to their parents because their parents raised them successfully.
In conclusion it is perferred that marriage could be chosen by people themselves. Marriage is the most important affair. Parents will not be responsible life of daughters' and sons' of all. Parents should give them some advice, however, the selection belongs to young adults. The countries where the parents select the marriage thave to change the convention.
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