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Taiwan And Singapore
In Asian countries of Taiwan and Singapore , They have been effected by China so there are similarities and differences between the two nations about History, Economy, Society. They are both tropical climate, island, high densely populated and wealthy nations in Asia.
Taiwan and Singapore have the history regard the colony.
They are comparatively known in 20 century. Because they are the new and public countries, which were independent of the other country that ruled them as colony in recently. But, Taiwan was on their own sovereign from china in 1949 whereas Singapore was from Malaysia in 1965. Furthermore, They both were under the dominion of Japan. However, along with lost of Japan in World War 2, Taiwan returned to China while Singapore returned to The UK. Also Taiwan was controlled by Japan for 51 years, Singapore was governed by Japan for 4 years.
Taiwan and Singapore has the similarities and differences to progress Economy.
They depend on their brain to develop their countries, Because they are both the poor nation about natural resources. So they are developed nation about finance, service which are divide into tertiary industries. But Taiwan advanced Information Technology and computer industries. In the contrast Singapore grew the industries about manufacture , intermediate trade.
In addition They both achieved to increase highly growth of economy by government and leader. Such a thing, they were called ‘Asian’s Four Dragon’ , which contains Hong Kong, Korea, Singapore, Taiwan, by foreign press. Their government opened the market for international company and served them various tax benefits with activity. However, now Taiwan’s the growth of economy have stagnant because of china’s restraint. On the other hand Singapore’s growth of economy have progressed continuously. Also Taiwan and Singapore have their own the currency. For example Taiwan use Taiwan Dollar , Singapore has Singapore Dollar.
Taiwan and Singapore ‘s society have effected by Chinese immigrants largely. However, They still have keep their unique culture and customs. In addition Taiwan was effected by Japan except China. In contrast Singapore was effected by Malaysia, India.
Also They both illiteracy ratio is low because of high enthusiasm of education and compulsory education. Taiwan is 5% of it, Singapore is 7% of it.
Although a number of Chinese live in both countries now, Taiwanese is the Majority of their country while various races live in Singapore.
Although Taiwan and Singapore is part of Asia, they have similarities and differences. They are the new country that were ruled by Japan in the past, while their economy process and currency is different, they accomplished high developed nation by government. In spite of fact that They are both affected by China, they still have keep their customs and culture. In addition Taiwan’s ethnic groups differ from Singapore’s.
In conclusion They are one of the important part in Asia, They are expected to grow up continuously..