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some (문장의 첫 단어는 대문자 시작입니다. 영어의 기본 중 기본이 되는 사항이므로 지켜주세요! 다른데에도 마찬가지입니다.) people think that school children should be given homework because of its important role in children. in my opinion, however, since it can affect overall education effectiveness and character formation negatively, homework plays a negative role in the education of children.
to begin with, massive homework is a stressful burden to children. homework can increase the stress rate of children. moreover, the stress of having to conduct their homework may result in their overall grade being reduced. (여기서 엔터 치지 않습니다.) a study was conducted by the Korean Education Board. the purpose of the study was to understand consensus view on what kind of matter make student stressful. the study gathered 100 high school students. researchers divided participants into two groups. the former group consisted of students who have to do their homework. they allowed students to rest after they had done the appropriate amount of homework. on the contrary, the latter group was not given any homework by their teachers. what researchers found was intriguing. after one month, they had to conduct some tests. Contrary to what was expected, the latter group got a better grade than the former group. according to the result of the study, the students of the latter group were able to control their stress and solve this quiz when they meet the unexpected question that they could solve the quiz. when it comes down to is that children who have not to conduct a massive amount of homework can control their stress and solve problems when they encounter the hard question. (토플 하다가 오신 것 같은데, 이렇게 쓰는 건 진짜 아무런 의미가 없습니다. 이에 대해서는 밑에서 말씀드릴게요.)
on top of that, homework can reduce the time for students to socialize with their student's parents. one can see that the best way to form a positive personality is communication with their parents. moreover, it seems clear that it can affect either student's grade and personality formation negatively or positively. (여기도 엔터 없이 갑니다.) i will illustrate my experience as an example. when I was in high school, I did not want to share my thought and emotion with my parents. i only focused on my educational achievement. what is of importance was only my grade and scores. i usually took 6hour per every day to do homework. i had no time to talk and share my daily life with my parents. but, after realizing what is important, i changed my behavior and style of doing homework. i was able to spend a lot of my time to socialize with my parents. then i could shape a good personality by sharing my blueprint with y parents. moreover, my school grade somewhat increased in the final semester. (지금의 반 정도로 간추리시면 됩니다. 이렇게 TMI 적으실 필요 없어요.)
in a nutshell, huge stress can weaken children's mental and physical health make children worse at physical health and mental health, it can influence on their efficiency of educational achievement. Moreover, the pressure of homework can eradicate the time to socialize with their parents. this time is the important thing for children. in sum, school children should not be given homework in order to gain educational achievement and form their personality. |