Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that governments should guarantee smokers' right because smoking is also one of the individual rights that some people may consider it important to maintain. However, I firmly believe that smokers almost always not only harm their own health, but they also negatively affect negatively to people surrounding them. 문제가 묻는 내용은 정부가 규제하는 것이 필요한가/아닌가이므로 smoker가 어떻다고 대답하는 것은 논점이 맞지 않습니다. 결과적으로 '정부가 규제해야 한다고 본다'라는 입장을 명확히 써 주어야 합니다.
To begin with, secondhand smoking smoke has a negative impact on innocent people who do not smoke. Smoking smells really bad, in addition to this, and it causes health risks such as lung cancer. As a the number of smokers increase, those the number of cancer patients surges at the same time. A recent study conducted by a research center in Busan shows that the number of people dying from secondhand smoking smoke is burgeoning every year due to the increased numbers in smoking.
On top of that, smoking has a negative effect on the city environment. Smoking Smoke leaves a dirty residue on building walls and sidewalks. The residue is really hard to get rid of because of its sticky components. Thus, people may feel disgusting disgust when they see those dirty things all over the place. Furthermore, governments have to spend a lot of money to clean up discarded cigarette butts. This indicates that smoking makes city appearance ugly, and it contributes to the waste of the city's finance extremely bad as well.
To sum up, smoking leads to secondhand smoking smoke which absolutely damages people's health, and it also affects the city environment in an unfavorable way. For these reasons, government should keep trying their best to fortify strengthen the antismoking policies. |