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As technology has advanced, transportation has magnificently (구어체에 가까운 표현이라 웬만하면 바꿔주시는 게 좋습니다.) developed. A part of the nations’ public opine that it is reasonable to invest a big amount of money for new speed railway constructions to connect cities while others assert that it is more important to improve public transport which they already have. This essay will explore both points of view until a conclusion is has derived.
First of all, very fast train affects not only fast transporting but also various fields of businesses. Basically, speed railway gives an opportunity to move quickly from a city to another city. It will lengthen the distance which individuals can visit in a day. Then, some jobs which requires the need to visit many cities would get better opportunities to deal with their work. In addition, a lot of individuals can utilize it to travel other cities more conveniently. Furthermore, it is necessary to employ massive people for construction and maintaining the system. Therefore, it will make many job opportunities places for the public.
On the other hand, existing public transportation system is already well-built and well-systemed. As the public have used them for a long time, it has been adjusting to fit citizens’ needs. If the public transportation is further developed, it would be more friendly to utilize to mass people because they are already get used to it. In addition, it is important to keep a good system which they already made rather than to keep making brand new systems which they cannot maintain. (이 they 가 지칭하는 사항이 앞 문장에 명확하게 드러나있지 않기 때문에 바로 they 를 사용할 수는 없습니다.)
Overall, new very fast trains have many opportunities benefits such as making new jobs connecting to the new railway system, and positively affecting other businesses. However, existing public transport system is already well-maintained and still working on being better systematic for mass people. Therefore, it would affect more friendly and directly to individuals. (그러므로 최종 결론인 무엇에 대한 투자가 이루어져야 한다는 점을 명확히 해주세요.)
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