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The number of people living alone is increasing nowadays in some countries. In my opinion, this development has equally both positive and negative effects.
Increasing of An increase in the number of people living alone can be regarded as positive for? (personal 을 통해 정확히 어떠한 표현을 의도하셨는지 애매해서 일단은 물음표로 두었습니다.) personal reasons. Firstly, from an individual perspective, people who decide to live alone without a family may be more independent that people than those who live with family members. For example, they have to acquire how to cook, clean and spend money economically. Moreover, it is possible that the rise in single person living alone the aforementioned phenomenon (이러한 잔기술은 익혀두시면 도움이 될 겁니다.) may have a ability to solve problems that happen to people who are separated from their parents. This is because there is no one when people who can help them immediately when people have a problem, so living apart from their family teaches not only independence but also responsibility.
However, we should not neglect the negative side of this trend should not be neglected (이렇게 적으면 불필요한 일인칭의 사용을 피할 수 있습니다.). First, people living alone might be able to may have psychological problems such as loneliness, depression and anxiety. Moreover, while an increase of independent people may be personally beneficial, it is not beneficial (beneficial 이 연속해서 사용되지 않도록 신경써주세요~) for psychological health. If people live with someone, they can help the people even if they get some problems on their mental and psychology, but it is really hard to keep their mental (한국에서와 달리 명사형으로 쓰이지 않습니다.) healthy by themselves.
In conclusion, I believe that this trend (새로운 문단이 시작되므로, 이 트렌드가 정확히 무엇을 지칭하는지 다시 한번 상기시켜주세요~) has both beneficial an negative effects on individual. The positive impact is that living alone encourages individuals' independence, but the negative aspect is that it can cause people's psychological problems.
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