Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that these days the
way many people contact with each other has changed due to technology. I think
that this change is a natural phenomenon on society because much technology is
affected by interacting with other people. (여기는 인과관계가 뒤바뀐 게 아닌가 생각되네요~다시 한번 확인해보세요!) Also, it is a positive effect on society.
To begin with, due to the development of
technology, many people spend a lot of time using Social Network Services such
as Instagram and Facebook. In other words, these applications play an important
role in contacting each other easily. For instance, many statistics have
consistently stated that many people use smartphones in order to contact with
other people by talking with other people and delivering some contents which
contain a lot of document. It is obvious the need for direct meetings are reduced, as the use of the aforementioned services do not require to make a reservation like cafes, thus there being no need to move to the place of appointment that they reduce meeting time directly
because they do not have to make a reservation like cafes and they cannot spend
their time moving the appointment areas. As a result, compared to the past,
using the Social Network Service helps people to save their time. Finally, I
think that many people are less likely to meet same places indirectly.
Moreover, (앞의 문단과 같은 맥락, 즉 기술의 발전이 사람 간의 관계 변화에 있어서 주는 변화에 대한 얘기를 하는 것이 아니라, 이게 긍정적인지 부정적인지를 다루는 내용이 따르므로 moreover 의 사용은 적절하지 않습니다.) changing the types of
relationships has a positive effect on society. This is because many people can easily access to remote areas. In other words, people can easily meet up with their
friends and co-workers regardless of distance. For example, many experts have
shown that many companies can build their branches around the world. To be
specific, they use smartphones and computers, which allows workers to exchange
easily some documents. It is obvious that they can simultaneously contact with
their co-workers. As a result, it is very convenient for citizens because they
can easily contact with other people.
In conclusion, I personally think that
developing technology leads to changing relationships and this gives citizens
positive effects.
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