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It is true that public health has been an ongoing issue in recent days. Some people say that the government should construct more sports facilities
for their citizens, while others believe that it does not affect physical
health a lot. In this regard, I will write this essay concerning each view and my opinion.
On the one hand, proximity is the most prominent
factor that people take action to go for a workout.
Easier access to fitness centers could promote modern people who are indulged
with their busy lives to do exercise. According to recent statistics, people tend to consider the distance
to the center as the most important thing than the
quality of training machines or the monthly
payment. Moreover, since there are not many areas where the community can intervene with their lifestyle, simply building
as many facilities as possible could be the best choice to support people’s health condition.
However, the number of public does not
equally climb up with the number of those facilities. Therefore, some people
insist that there would be much better ways to care about public health, rather
than building such infrastructure, since
human beings need some motivation and
recognition for the backgrounds or seriousness of the problems for actions.
Through public advertising or campaign, social messages can be conveyed regarding diseases or health complications which might be resulted from lack of unbalanced diet
and exercise as well as an appropriate precaution so that people would voluntarily
manage to improve their health.
In conclusion, despite the benefits that a
number of sports facilities would bring out, I think the
government should take other steps to increase both people’s awareness and practice
for their bodies.
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