People commonly think that it is beneficial for students to take a part-time job while they are in their teens. However, there is a more persuasive argument that working part-time as a teenager can distract students from their studies, thereby affecting them adversely.
On the one hand, holding a part-time job can help students become more understanding towards their parents. There are many teenagers who have working parents nowadays, and a lot of them feel neglected by their parents because their parents sometimes have to prioritize work over spending time with them. This can lead to misunderstandings and rifts between parents and children. For instance, there are many fathers who become estranged from their families his family after retirement because they failed to create a strong bond with their children and wives due to work. If teenagers hold a part-time job, they can learn from an early age how difficult it is to make a livelihood, so they will be able to empathize with their parents more and this is likely to lead to improved relationships between parents and their children.
Nevertheless, having a job while still being in school can have negative effects on their (문단에 처음 등장하는 사항은 대명사로 서술해서는 안 됩니다.) studies. As students, their priority should be their school work but if they work part-time, they will use lots of time and energy on work. Therefore, it can lead to their school grades falling. For instance, there is recent research that a lot of students who had to work while being in school due to their family circumstances could not excel in their studies and failed to enter prestigious universities. This eventually led to a low standard of living. If those students were not forced to take a part-time job, they could have invested all their energy into studying and had a better chance of success.
In conclusion, there are some advantages to encouraging teenagers to work, but it is clear that disadvantages far outweigh the benefits. (어떠한 단점이 있었는지에 대해 다시 한번 짧게나마 요약해주세요!)