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Today more and more are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
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Nowadays, society should discuss the beneficial and detrimental aspects of visiting places where conditions are difficult countries because doing this will lead to benefits and disadvantages at the same time. For this reason, the issue of traveling difficult conditions' countries should be carefully considered.
First of all, the issue of visiting difficult environment's countries would be advantages because this can lead to positive outcomes. This is because visiting difficult conditions' countries would help people have various experiences . For example experts form western countries like the United States emphasize the importance of visiting difficult conditions' countries allow people to learn about the countries’ cultures even the countries’ languages. As a result, traveling where conditions are difficult countries has effects on variety.
On the other hand, the problem of traveling difficult conditions' countries is causing concern among many people due to risks of crime. According to a 2018 report form Seoul University in Korea, crime rate of places where conditions are difficult countries significantly increased from 2000 to 2007. In my case, when I visited difficult conditions' countries, I was exposed to crime even I had to come back my accommodation earlier than when I visited places where conditions are desirable.
All in all, the topic of traveling places where conditions are difficult countries can have valuable experiences benefits, but it can also lead risks disadvantages. Based on this, it is clear that the pros and cons aspects of visiting places where conditions are difficult countries should not be ignored by society any longer.
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Total Score: /9 Examiner:
TR
(Task Response) CC
(Coherence and Cohesion) LR
(Lexical Resource) GRA
(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
Score /9 /9 /9 /9
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